Tuesday, October 23, 2007

Lukes awesome poems



Pencil

I lie on the table motionless waiting for him

My newly sharpened point glints in the sunlight

I am wooden and plain nothing too exciting about me

The giant walks toward me and picks me up

He puts my point on the paper and starts writing

At the start he grinds me across the page

After a minute his ideas start to come

Little does he know it is because of my brilliance

While he is reading I am used as a drumstick against the side of the table

Over the few months I have been alive I’ve been bitten and thrown

Whacked and lost for a while

It is so unfair, we are smarter and more valuable than these worthless humans

But they get all the credit for the writing and they get treated well

I guess it’s just the way it is

I can’t convince these humans what they’re doing is wrong

I don’t have a say in things

After he is finished he drops me on the table and runs away to play

And I am alone again

By: Luke Stein



Here is another Martian poem



An Ode to a Cottage Mouse

Why don’t they let us live in peace with them?

They set up devices that will snap our necks

The devices are made up of wood and iron

When they spot us they become angry and try to squish us

So we live in permanent hiding

Do they get pleasure out of killing?

If not, what purpose does it have?

We will just keep multiplying

We go in to a place with doors and floors of wood

It is where they keep their food

They have so much why don’t they share?

But some mice are safe

They live in cages

They are fed and rubbed

Held and loved

Why are we any different?

We do the same things as them

But they get special treatment

Is it because they are purchased in a store?

They can just put us in a cage and feed us and love us

They are very silly wasting their money

Are colony is dying and we need help

Maybe they will change and start helping not killing

Maybe just maybe we can live in peace


By: Luke Stein

Age:12


A Martian poem is a poem from someone or something else's perspective if you haven't already realized that from my poems. I chose a pencil because I saw it laying on the desk beside me and I wondered what it would be like to be a pencil.


For the mouse poem I wrote about it because I have a mouse infestation at my cottage and I also thought what it would be like to be a mouse in permanent hiding.



By: Luke